My first story

[Jkloon]

so, I wrote a story and uploaded it to deviant art. Hope you all enjoy it.

http://nighthawk703.deviantart.com

[Banzure]

Re: My first story

Nicely written, good details, but I assume it's only the beginning?

[Jkloon]

Re: My first story

Yup, it's only part one

[blowitupbig]

Re: My first story

That's a cool story. If only......

[Jkloon]

Re: My first story

If only what?

[perchedontheloon]

Re: My first story

I think it is pretty excellent!

[Jkloon]

Re: My first story

Thanks!

[Jkloon]

Re: My first story

I've uploaded a few other parts, up to part 4 (which is accidentally labeled as 3)