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  • wildheart
    Senior Member
    • Apr 2015
    • 859

    The pool

    Just finished writing my next looner story. Been working on this one for a while. It has to be my favourite setting out of all my stories. Imagine having an empty swimming pool full of balloons and inflatables and sharing it with two other looners. It's too long to post here so here's a link to it on my website.

    Sophie and Jenny drive through an empty car park of a leisure centre.  “When you said your friend had a pool, I didn't think it would be in a place like this. I imagined a small pool in the...
    How big will it go? Only one way to find out...
    My website: loonerstories.weebly.com
  • Bubble Boy :-P

    #2
    Re: The pool

    Great setting, awesome plot, wonderful characters, very well written....& TOTALLY HOT! I almost messed myself while reading! You write some superb stories, wildheart! Keep it up! I can't wait to see where you're gonna take the characters next time! HELLA AWESOME STUFF!

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    • Bubble Boy :-P

      #3
      Re: The pool

      & damn what i wouldn't give to live out that out in real life! Stuff of dreams....

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      • wildheart
        Senior Member
        • Apr 2015
        • 859

        #4
        Re: The pool

        I know right, would love to witness/participate in something like that. Glad you enjoyed. Got to come up with another good setting now. The next one is gonna be a little different I think.
        How big will it go? Only one way to find out...
        My website: loonerstories.weebly.com

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        • b0f0s0f
          Senior Member
          • Nov 2016
          • 296

          #5
          Re: The pool

          Jenny is probably my favorite character since my fetish spawned from a phobia, so it's really hot to read stories about girls who are the same.

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          • ChillinHaze
            Senior Member
            • Sep 2016
            • 133

            #6
            Re: The pool

            Overall a really nice read. ^^

            There was but one detail that seemed off to me. Somewhere in there was written that the pool was full of pooltoys but after I finished reading it really seemed like they only had those few beachballs and the air matress.
            It just sounded like they had a big amount of various inflatables with them.
            But I guess it they had an enormous stack of balloons to compensate that. ^^

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            • wildheart
              Senior Member
              • Apr 2015
              • 859

              #7
              Re: The pool

              Originally posted by ChillinHaze
              Overall a really nice read. ^^

              There was but one detail that seemed off to me. Somewhere in there was written that the pool was full of pooltoys but after I finished reading it really seemed like they only had those few beachballs and the air matress.
              It just sounded like they had a big amount of various inflatables with them.
              But I guess it they had an enormous stack of balloons to compensate that. ^^
              I guess there wasn't enough time to use them all. I wanted it to be more about balloons anyway because that's what most people prefer. They may turn up in another story though...
              How big will it go? Only one way to find out...
              My website: loonerstories.weebly.com

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              • LoonLover1999

                #8
                Re: The pool

                Ok first off love the story. Second off I cannot help but notice Dan has not been in a story in a while.

                My third point is more of a request... I would actually like to see a story of how Holly and Sophie met as it has only been referenced in minor detail. That to me is the only story that is a vital missing piece.

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                • ChillinHaze
                  Senior Member
                  • Sep 2016
                  • 133

                  #9
                  Re: The pool

                  Originally posted by wildheart
                  I guess there wasn't enough time to use them all. I wanted it to be more about balloons anyway because that's what most people prefer. They may turn up in another story though...
                  I see, that's of course understandable. ^^

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                  • wildheart
                    Senior Member
                    • Apr 2015
                    • 859

                    #10
                    Re: The pool

                    Originally posted by LoonLover1999
                    Ok first off love the story. Second off I cannot help but notice Dan has not been in a story in a while.

                    My third point is more of a request... I would actually like to see a story of how Holly and Sophie met as it has only been referenced in minor detail. That to me is the only story that is a vital missing piece.
                    True, I have been thinking about doing that for a while. There's been references to it in a few stories but a full story would be good. I'm working on a public popping one now but after that I'll probably do how they met.
                    How big will it go? Only one way to find out...
                    My website: loonerstories.weebly.com

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                    • Bobberloon
                      Junior Member
                      • Feb 2016
                      • 16

                      #11
                      Re: The pool

                      I look forward to reading the next one!

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