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Old 19-12-2017, 02:03 AM
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looks like literotica posted both of my new stories!

first: balloonville part 4, in which jeff takes a room at the balloonville bed and breakfast, and gets the most remarkable demonstration of lungpower he's ever seen! (but just who was it who blew up that nice big q24 in the corner? we'll find out in another chapter...)

https://www.literotica.com/s/balloon...4-bedding-down

next, chapter four in the balloon factory series. here we meet marketing manager melanie, and found out how she became such an amazing balloon blower. it's a bit of a darker story than the others, with a man who manipulater her into blowing balloons... but in the end, she dealt a big "blow" to his ego!

https://www.literotica.com/s/balloon...-pt-04-melanie

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Old 19-12-2017, 12:05 PM
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Nice work! Good to see other ongoing series too - keep it up!
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Old 20-12-2017, 01:02 AM
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I love the way that Jeff is in total disbelief at the whole town. I could imagine a similar story where the guy just went along with everything no questions asked, but I think your twist makes it way better. Jeff's utter confusion and surprise at every crazy thing that happens is exactly how I'd feel in that situation and it makes it all the more enjoyable to read. I legitimately laughed out loud at the line "don't tell my boss I used the F-word" after all that had just happened. Great stuff!
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Old 29-12-2017, 04:34 PM
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Loving these stories! Thank you so much!
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Old 29-12-2017, 07:43 PM
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You are very, VERY talented, blowhyoooge
You write with the stuff of dreams!
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Old 29-12-2017, 10:03 PM
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Originally Posted by blowhyoooge View Post
... (but just who was it who blew up that nice big q24 in the corner? we'll find out in another chapter...) ...
So I don't know why, but reading this teaser without any knowledge of your series, I imagined this old, wizardly character standing in the corner, clutching the nozzle of a fully necked crystal Q24. Probably 'cause the Q24 is merely the stuff of legends nowadays. :-( Still, I thought my mental picture was pretty funny.

Last edited by BlueYoshi; 29-12-2017 at 10:05 PM. Reason: To clarify that he's a wizard and not just old
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I swear I keep checking your page like 3 times a week to see if there's a new part to the story yet...
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I know your stories are really cool and nice
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how is the story going? dying to know what happens next
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