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Old 06-09-2015, 09:46 PM
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Default Finally finished a story
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I finally managed to finish a chapter of the story I've been working on for a long time now.
http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...Past-558697586
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Old 06-12-2015, 07:32 PM
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Chapter 3 is now out: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...-Day-576396508

I'm hoping to finish chapter 4 very soon as well
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Old 08-12-2015, 07:22 AM
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Been loving this story! Chapter 3 was easily my most favorite part thus far, I really like the characters and the direction you've set up very a delight to read. Please continue!
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Old 08-12-2015, 10:42 PM
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Thanks a lot! It's much thanks to you (and cgrocarlos) that I got the inspiration to try this out
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Old 08-12-2015, 11:04 PM
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Not exactly my kink, but still very nicely written, a few lightyears beyond what I've done, keep up the good work
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Old 09-12-2015, 10:30 PM
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Thanks a lot! It's much thanks to you (and cgrocarlos) that I got the inspiration to try this out
Glad I could be of some inspiration! Your stories have been great so far, keep it up! I've been working on some new ones for a really really long time but I've been really lazy too. Maybe I'll add some this December.

We should collectively make a good site like that old one by Chipple with tons and tons of balloon stories.

In case you or anyone else doesn't know what I'm referring to: http://web.archive.org/web/200212071...loons/stories/
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Old 10-12-2015, 11:43 PM
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I think I have all the old Chipple stories in a pdf file somewhere Some of them are really great. I also have a bunch of stories that were submitted to a story-writing competition on a different forum many years ago.
A site dedicated to this sort of stuff would be cool.

Anyway, here's chapter 4: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...rank-577272254
Finished this a month ago, so I just did some small changes here and there. Please tell me if you spot any obvious spelling errors or other things that seems strange that I might have missed. I can't stand reading my own stuff, so I'm just trusting the spellcheck
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Old 13-12-2015, 06:56 AM
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Wanted to give you the shout out, your series that you've been writing is fantastic! It's really on point, looking forward to reading more!
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Old 23-02-2016, 11:11 PM
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Just finished the first of potentially three parts of chapter 5: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...rt-I-592682072
It's a little on the dark side I guess, but hopefully you'll still enjoy it. And don't worry, the rest of the chapter is going to be more cheerful If you like the somewhat darker setting though, I might have some ideas for some future chapters

Also check out this other short story I wrote a little while ago: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Lisa-s-Loons-591462334
Hope you like it!
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Old 25-03-2016, 02:47 PM
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Just finished the last part of chapter 5.
Part 2: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...t-II-595082496
Part 3: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...-III-598771652
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