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There's been a drought recently regarding art and stories (or at least, stuff that rubs me the right way) so I have writing a try. Give it a read, tell me what you think.

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Old 25-07-2014, 06:47 PM
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Awesome, hot story you wrote there! The content is excellent, and your descriptiveness regarding what's going on is very good! There were a few grammatical errors ("Fiendish" should have been "Fiendishly") but I think most readers would be too turned on by the content of the story to even notice! I would definitely read a part 2 if you were to write one. Also, I have to say, your forum signature is awesome!
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Thank you for the kind words. I really should have done some proofreading (or have someone else do it, fresh eyes do it better I suppose) But glad you liked it none the less. Would there be anything in particular you would enjoy happening in a second part of that story?
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Very nice! Not particularly my own personal fetish but it was a fun read, I enjoyed it.
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Might as well use this thread again, rather than making a new one. Wrote another story, tell me what you think.
http://banzure.deviantart.com/art/A-...tage-508274961
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Posted a story, a girl friend of mine wrote me a while ago, about time I get back to doing some writing, her story inspired me, working on something new, but for now, here's this: http://banzure.deviantart.com/art/Wo...atch-535381890
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I did a story again, was in the mood and had dream a few days ago, finally got it turned into words, give it a read if you want: http://banzure.deviantart.com/art/Bi...-big-635095872

Still need to sort out grammar and such, will get around to that eventually :P
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