Also trying my hand at writing

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  • cgrocarlos
    Senior Member
    • Oct 2011
    • 140

    Also trying my hand at writing

    This is only the introduction to what hopefully becomes a much larger piece of work. Figured the story would need to start off with a bang, if you know what I mean

    Please let me know what you think, I love helpful criticism. I've already completed a full chapter that builds on the intro, but it's going slow. I don't have much time to actually work on it.

  • Ash_738
    Member
    • Jun 2013
    • 84

    #2
    Re: Also trying my hand at writing

    Created a DA account just to read it. Certainly made my Monday morning more interesting Thanks for sharing!
    Shut up and blow!

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    • cgrocarlos
      Senior Member
      • Oct 2011
      • 140

      #3
      Re: Also trying my hand at writing

      Thanks, glad you enjoyed it

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      • linkinnic
        Junior Member
        • Dec 2013
        • 14

        #4
        Re: Also trying my hand at writing

        Wow dude, that was really well written.
        Please share more, I love love to read more of your awesome content.
        Cheers

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        • cgrocarlos
          Senior Member
          • Oct 2011
          • 140

          #5
          Re: Also trying my hand at writing

          Thank you! I actually have 6 more currently written that follow the main character's storyline. I'm planning on releasing them all together as one big collection of short stories once I'm happy with them.

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          • linkinnic
            Junior Member
            • Dec 2013
            • 14

            #6
            Re: Also trying my hand at writing

            Awesome news Carlos!
            Can I be your proof reader for these?
            I'm looking forward to more of those stories.
            Cheers
            Nick

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            • cgrocarlos
              Senior Member
              • Oct 2011
              • 140

              #7
              Re: Also trying my hand at writing

              Sure! I'll send them to you before publishing them on Deviant Art

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              • Jkloon
                Senior Member
                • Aug 2013
                • 357

                #8
                Re: Also trying my hand at writing

                Looking forward to it

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                • linkinnic
                  Junior Member
                  • Dec 2013
                  • 14

                  #9
                  Re: Also trying my hand at writing

                  Hey Carlos,
                  I sent you a PM, shoot me an e-mail when you get the chance.
                  Cheers

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                  • OverTheTop
                    Senior Member
                    • Dec 2013
                    • 711

                    #10
                    Re: Also trying my hand at writing

                    Post here when you release them, I'd love to read them!

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                    • cgrocarlos
                      Senior Member
                      • Oct 2011
                      • 140

                      #11
                      Re: Also trying my hand at writing

                      Just finished uploading parts 2 through 6 of my short story series to deviantart. Check them out if you're interested. I'd love to hear feedback.



                      I have parts 7 through 9 written but they're still in the proofreading stage. Hopefully they'll be coming soon.

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                      • perchedontheloon
                        Member
                        • Dec 2014
                        • 63

                        #12
                        Re: Also trying my hand at writing

                        I wanted to give you the shout out on here too. I thoroughly enjoyed your story! Keep it up!

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                        • cgrocarlos
                          Senior Member
                          • Oct 2011
                          • 140

                          #13
                          Re: Also trying my hand at writing

                          Thanks! Your comments are always much appreciated!

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                          • cgrocarlos
                            Senior Member
                            • Oct 2011
                            • 140

                            #14
                            Re: Also trying my hand at writing

                            Part 7 of my story is up, check it out and let me know what you think! If you like Alex from my other parts, you'll love this one. She plays a pretty big part

                            This is the last part of the first series of stories. The next series will take place in college. Let me know what you think and/or what you would like to read in future stories. The link to my gallery is below.

                            Thanks!

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