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Old 25-07-2014, 06:47 PM
Magus Wolf Magus Wolf is offline
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Thumbs up Re: Gave writing a try...
Awesome, hot story you wrote there! The content is excellent, and your descriptiveness regarding what's going on is very good! There were a few grammatical errors ("Fiendish" should have been "Fiendishly") but I think most readers would be too turned on by the content of the story to even notice! I would definitely read a part 2 if you were to write one. Also, I have to say, your forum signature is awesome!
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