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Old 04-12-2016, 12:49 AM
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Default Re: Trying out a new concept
Anyone want to help out with this series by giving comments/suggestions on where to take the stories?

Hey everyone, I'm posting a series on deviantart and wanted to get some feedback. But first, background. I have been wanting to do a series of shorter (500-1000 words) stories for a while and I was thinking about a concept for setting up the story. I was pretty happy with myself for crafting the format but I don't exactly get a lot of traffic on dA, so I'm coming here for help.

Premise: a girl with a balloon fetish and an instagram account posts that she'll spend the whole day with balloons stuffed in her leopard print catsuit. Every hour, she'll post a new photo based on the comments she receives. Obvious inflation set up is obvious right? Initially there were quite a few comments and then work got busy, the holidays were upon me, and my writing waned. I know it's not going to be everyone's cup of tea but I want to extend the series.

http://perchedontheloon.deviantart.com


The series is called "A Day Stuffed" and I would appreciate any help.
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