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I nearly jizzed myself at the end of the chapter Excellent & effective story telling...it reads very well
Six foot cloud busters blown to pop?! Those maids must have some power lungs,lol! Hella awesome! I'm hooked on this story! I can't wait to see what's in store for Jeff next!!!! -
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thanks! i always like to know what people like the best so i can incorporate more into future chapters.Comment
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Thank you for a great story, I love the balloonville story. I would do like Jeff, jizz my pants. I would love to see Jeff caught in the act by one of the balloon blowing goddesses while he is humping a loon. And then see how it plays outComment
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that's a good idea, balloonrider. what would you want to happen if you were jeff and you got caught humping a balloon?Comment
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I think a scenery where there is a knock on the door, and a one of the girls in the bed and breakfast is turning up to do a turn down service of the room. Which would involve blowing up several big balloons. She would then turn to Jeff and look at his loon and say you like riding them don’t you, then she would ask him to get on top of a gl 500 and blow it up super tight, and just as he shoots his load it burst with a massive bangComment
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great idea @balloonrider! i have some gl action (actually gl1200) planned for a later chapter, but i did a quick outline in which someone walks in on jeff when he is humping a balloon. it'll probably be suzette, the mattress-blowing babe, because great things always seem to happen to jeff when she shows up! funny you should mention what happens during turn down service... did you break into my house and read ahead? lol! you'll learn about turn-down service at the balloonville b&b in chapter 7Comment
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just read the balloonville stories, and got a couple remarks:
1. Amazing story/writing easy to read
2.instand boner when imagining this happening to myself
3. wishing this would be a real town and close to me
4. need daily new chapters haha
5. Loved it!Comment
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@blowhyooge - "did you break into my house and read ahead?" so funny I cant wait for the next chapters to come, you have great writing skills. So I wait with excitement for the turn down service in chapter 7 - I always love hotels that have a decent turn down serviceComment
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sorry guys chapter 6 just keeps getting longer and longer (and it sounds like that's happening to some of you as well
what can i say, jeff keeps stumbling into all these balloon-blowing ladies as he makes his way through the story!Comment
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