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  • Banzure
    Inflater of Dolls
    • Feb 2013
    • 257

    Gave writing a try...

    There's been a drought recently regarding art and stories (or at least, stuff that rubs me the right way) so I have writing a try. Give it a read, tell me what you think.

    Bigger is good, but burst is better!
  • Magus Wolf
    Junior Member
    • Jul 2014
    • 4

    #2
    Re: Gave writing a try...

    Awesome, hot story you wrote there! The content is excellent, and your descriptiveness regarding what's going on is very good! There were a few grammatical errors ("Fiendish" should have been "Fiendishly") but I think most readers would be too turned on by the content of the story to even notice! I would definitely read a part 2 if you were to write one. Also, I have to say, your forum signature is awesome!

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    • Banzure
      Inflater of Dolls
      • Feb 2013
      • 257

      #3
      Re: Gave writing a try...

      Thank you for the kind words. I really should have done some proofreading (or have someone else do it, fresh eyes do it better I suppose) But glad you liked it none the less. Would there be anything in particular you would enjoy happening in a second part of that story?
      Bigger is good, but burst is better!

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      • cgrocarlos
        Senior Member
        • Oct 2011
        • 140

        #4
        Re: Gave writing a try...

        Very nice! Not particularly my own personal fetish but it was a fun read, I enjoyed it.

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        • Banzure
          Inflater of Dolls
          • Feb 2013
          • 257

          #5
          Re: Gave writing a try...

          Might as well use this thread again, rather than making a new one. Wrote another story, tell me what you think.
          Bigger is good, but burst is better!

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          • Banzure
            Inflater of Dolls
            • Feb 2013
            • 257

            #6
            Re: Gave writing a try...

            Posted a story, a girl friend of mine wrote me a while ago, about time I get back to doing some writing, her story inspired me, working on something new, but for now, here's this: http://banzure.deviantart.com/art/Wo...atch-535381890
            Bigger is good, but burst is better!

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            • Banzure
              Inflater of Dolls
              • Feb 2013
              • 257

              #7
              Re: Gave writing a try...

              I did a story again, was in the mood and had dream a few days ago, finally got it turned into words, give it a read if you want: http://banzure.deviantart.com/art/Bi...-big-635095872

              Still need to sort out grammar and such, will get around to that eventually :P
              Bigger is good, but burst is better!

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