Finally finished a story
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Chapter 3 is now out: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...-Day-576396508
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Been loving this story! Chapter 3 was easily my most favorite part thus far, I really like the characters and the direction you've set up very a delight to read. Please continue!Comment
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We should collectively make a good site like that old one by Chipple with tons and tons of balloon stories.
In case you or anyone else doesn't know what I'm referring to: http://web.archive.org/web/200212071...loons/stories/Comment
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I think I have all the old Chipple stories in a pdf file somewhere Some of them are really great. I also have a bunch of stories that were submitted to a story-writing competition on a different forum many years ago.
A site dedicated to this sort of stuff would be cool.
Anyway, here's chapter 4: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...rank-577272254
Finished this a month ago, so I just did some small changes here and there. Please tell me if you spot any obvious spelling errors or other things that seems strange that I might have missed. I can't stand reading my own stuff, so I'm just trusting the spellcheckComment
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Wanted to give you the shout out, your series that you've been writing is fantastic! It's really on point, looking forward to reading more!Comment
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Just finished the first of potentially three parts of chapter 5: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...rt-I-592682072
It's a little on the dark side I guess, but hopefully you'll still enjoy it. And don't worry, the rest of the chapter is going to be more cheerful If you like the somewhat darker setting though, I might have some ideas for some future chapters
Also check out this other short story I wrote a little while ago: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Lisa-s-Loons-591462334
Hope you like it!Comment
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Just finished the last part of chapter 5.
Part 2: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...t-II-595082496
Part 3: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...-III-598771652Comment
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I'm loving this story! Picturing everything in my mind was literally a "blast"! Would be nice if I was on a balloon though.You never know when it's gonna pop!Comment
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I finally did something again! http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...rt-I-647903877
I was kind of inspired by perchedontheloon's latest project, as I couldn't come up with anything I was happy with for the next bit. So if you have any suggestions for what happens next, feel free to post them on DA, in this thread or send me a PM. The more suggestions I get, the better. Of course I can't promise that YOUR suggestion will end up in the story, but I'll consider everything that I read.Comment
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Re: Finally finished a story
Posted a new short story: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Lisa...ns-2-689092151
Still trying to figure out what to do with my main storyComment
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