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Forum: Poems and Stories 31-10-2017, 05:59 PM
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Posted By lyckr
Re: Psychology college

Oh, I've been looking forward to this! What an explosive continuation... :p
Forum: Poems and Stories 30-10-2016, 05:33 PM
Replies: 15
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Posted By lyckr
Re: Psychology college

Aww, you leave us with a cliffhanger and give us a flashback? Now you're just teasing us :p
Have to love it when the clerk at the party store shows you how far you can push the balloons though!
Forum: Poems and Stories 09-10-2016, 12:52 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 9,382
Posted By lyckr
Re: Psychology college

That's a very promising start. I really like the setup for the story :)
The language looks good, but the formatting could use some improvement I think. I like to start a new line whenever a...
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