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Banzure 25-07-2014 06:04 PM

Gave writing a try...
There's been a drought recently regarding art and stories (or at least, stuff that rubs me the right way) so I have writing a try. Give it a read, tell me what you think.

Magus Wolf 25-07-2014 06:47 PM

Re: Gave writing a try...
Awesome, hot story you wrote there! The content is excellent, and your descriptiveness regarding what's going on is very good! There were a few grammatical errors ("Fiendish" should have been "Fiendishly") but I think most readers would be too turned on by the content of the story to even notice! I would definitely read a part 2 if you were to write one. Also, I have to say, your forum signature is awesome!

Banzure 25-07-2014 07:06 PM

Re: Gave writing a try...
Thank you for the kind words. I really should have done some proofreading (or have someone else do it, fresh eyes do it better I suppose) But glad you liked it none the less. Would there be anything in particular you would enjoy happening in a second part of that story?

cgrocarlos 30-07-2014 06:52 AM

Re: Gave writing a try...
Very nice! Not particularly my own personal fetish but it was a fun read, I enjoyed it.

Banzure 20-01-2015 11:13 AM

Re: Gave writing a try...
Might as well use this thread again, rather than making a new one. Wrote another story, tell me what you think.

Banzure 25-05-2015 11:27 PM

Re: Gave writing a try...
Posted a story, a girl friend of mine wrote me a while ago, about time I get back to doing some writing, her story inspired me, working on something new, but for now, here's this:

Banzure 18-09-2016 03:32 AM

Re: Gave writing a try...
I did a story again, was in the mood and had dream a few days ago, finally got it turned into words, give it a read if you want:

Still need to sort out grammar and such, will get around to that eventually :P

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